I would say that the same sounds aren't good enough (or at least their placement in the mix)
I suggest trying different patterns. Maybe that will make them "fit".
Hope this review is helpful to you!
It is a good song, the sound quality is pretty decent.
Try adding new tracks in order to make the loopable sections more interesting, or just to fill the "void".
In that way the song can keep its true essence without feeling too repetitive.
Thanks for the feedback! It is effectively one loop mangled and octave transposed and so on, so I can see why you might find it a bit repetive, I will consider advice for future tracks.
the sound is pretty good, I feel that maybe it needed more effects in some changes, and the hi hat needs to be more noticeable.
overall is a pretty nice song! specially the piano section.
thanks, i appreciate the kind words and constructive criticism!
Completely extraordinary! All the changes and the creepy atmosphere, accompanied with thrilling (and violent) bridges makes this song worth 5/5 stars.
added to favorites.
very entertaining, I love how it makes a lot of changes.
From childish, to spooky, and vice versa.
It deserves a 5/5.
keep up the good work!
I love vice versas.
very good song!
I do not think it can be improved in some way, it is quite perfect already.
5/5 added to favorites.
Thanks :D! I tried my best.
4:04 - 4:07 it is normal that the bass disappears in that section?
the kick is a little weak.
But in general this song is MAGNIFICENT! added on favorites =)
Nice job, truly spooky.
I'll recommend to use more instruments to "fill more the void" like a choir or some strings.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
I appreciate the recommendation, however I have a particular distaste for too much clutter, I prefer to write my songs nice and simple, however I will agree that I should have added a bit of an overtone towards the end of the song.
I do not know what to say about how you could improve the song, perhaps add more rhythms; but overall it is pretty good.
I´ll be sure to work on the rythms, thanks for the feedback!
It is good; but can be improved.
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